In order to address the question of "How effective is the combination of your main products and ancillary tasks?" we produced a split screen directors commentary, regarding areas such as lighting, font, central image, and other aesthetic areas. In order to make what we were talking about clearer we motivationally placed images of the respective ancillary tasks/trailer shots - by doing so, we can also show how our influences majorly affected us and expand upon evaluation question 1 with regards to real-media texts.
Wednesday, 25 February 2015
Friday, 20 February 2015
Evaluation Question 1
Genre - 1
Specific conventions are found among observations of
Big-City Crime Thrillers within real media texts, bringing together ideals of
high production values and vibrant lighting as seen within Welcome to The Punch, Hummingbird/Redemption
and Only God Forgives. Within
conventions of trailers, this can then be reflected through motivational
editing between an ambiguous antagonist and the city in an attempt to show a
claustrophobic atmosphere with the bright lights of the surrounding area acting
as an analogy for the emotional and situational manipulation of the antagonist,
especially within our trailer. Segments of Act 2 utilise cutaways between Aaron
Mays (The protagonist) and the suggested antagonist, further emphasized within
the montage, where these cutaways are shown in conjunction with brightly lit
shots of the city. Even within the opening shot of the trailer, which is an
attempt to show equilibrium, the handheld downwards tilt of the ominously lit
building show how the proposed safety found throughout conventions of Act 1 is
instantaneously challenged. In this way; conventions of the genre are both
questioned and conformed to, reflecting Welcome
to The Punch’s opening city shots while contrasting the lighting and
intimacy within the bar.
Welcome to The Punch |
There are, however, aspects of hybridity which can be found
within the trailer. The desire to produce a high production value crime
thriller on no budget meant that some shots had to still be stylised, although
were not able to take place in the city. Due to this My Brother the Devil-like shots such as the alleyway panning shot
found within the montage and enclosed hallway shots through Act 1 paint the
genre of the film as more of a drama-cross-thriller film, utilising both
locational and lighting tropes of crime thrillers in combination with narrative
connotations such as revenge, innocence, and friendship, commonly found within
Drama films (Fight Club, American History X, Boyhood). In this way I believe there has been an interaction
between genre conventions, both being challenged and conformed to, leading to a
development within tropes of the genre. Classic themes, such as The Bourne Trilogy’s revenge, are
developed upon in conjunction with dramatic motifs to form a more character
based Crime Thriller which still adheres to both trailer conventions and the
vibrant, high budget aesthetics found within The Dark Knight Rises.
My Brother the Devil |
Location - 2
Particular care was taken when deciding upon location due to
the aforementioned tropes of the Crime Thriller genre. We attempted to find an
anonymity within the locations chosen, using stylishly lit locations which
could be representative of a big city anywhere. By doing so, our trailer moves
away from the traditionally British ideals of Social Realism (Shifty) and in to a more American genre
of thriller, drawing upon Barthes Cultural code amongst active audience to
increase tension and interest in the film. This interaction between
traditionally British Guy Ritchie-like isolation and Christopher Nolan’s
big-city blockbusters places the audiences focus on the main characters, with
the location acting as a suggestive analogy which can be decoded by segments of
our wider audience. Examples within our trailer can be found within the RockNRolla type bar, where dark
surroundings are used in conjunction with a dim blue wash, joining tropes of
the aforementioned directors, as well as bustling city shots such as the
handheld tracking shot of Aaron and Georgie through China Town. The merging of
the two paint implicit messages regarding the characters situations, again
developing upon conventions of real media products through an interaction
between cultural tropes concerning location.
RockNRolla (Top) and Shifty (Bottom) |
Graphics/Title - 3
Drawing upon the previously mentioned hybridity of our
conventions of genre, the narrative graphics and title which were produced have
both implications and tropes of Drama and Crime Thriller films. Reflecting the
bright and vibrant blue lighting aforementioned, the graphics take on an
action-based aesthetic look which draws together the trailers stylistics and
the connotations of the colours which are present. The main influences for our
narrative graphics was that of Welcome to
The Punch’s colour and aesthetics with an expansion upon Only God Forgives’ presence of a
motivated background image, with this being found especially within the final
title. The raise from 0% opacity to 25% opacity on both the particle stock and
the light stock draw upon connotations from both big-city and Western films;
using the particle stock to reflect the isolation within the protagonists
situation and the flaring red lights which can either symbolise danger or
police. The final title then raises up from 0% opacity, with both ‘Two’ and
‘Evils’ utilising a radial blur in an attempt to form an analogy between the
text and the narrative. Within the text of the prior narrative graphics; ‘When
you are caught between two worlds’, ‘Which way do you turn?’ the same blue
lighting is used, however, the motivational editing of both the police and main
antagonist group reflect the aforementioned blurred distinctions concerning
moral boundaries which are relevant to both Drama and Crime Thriller films. The
use of a bold and wide typeface in conjunction with the already thick font both
allowed for the background stocks, representative of the city, to be fully
appreciated as well as the clear narrative message of the trailer to be taken
in to account. In this way we conform to the conventions of genre with regards
to graphics; the colour and stylistics of the narrative graphics and title are
paralleled to that of Dark Knight Rises, Drive and Gangster Squad, emphasizing
the usefulness of our research and planning in to previous graphic
influences.
Drive (Left) and The Dark Knight Rises (Right) |
Colour/Style - 4
The emphasis upon colour within the previously mentioned
categories is due to me and my partners’ influences within the neon/high budget
films of the 21st century such as Drive, Sin City and Manhunter. Colour within areas such as
surroundings, narrative graphics, the title and character affiliations allow a
development within narrative and connotations which doesn’t require speech or an
increased amount of shots. Starting out with the neon teal lighting of the
opening shot, the motifs of danger and 24/7 insecurity are shown throughout the
trailer, coming to a head within the montage with the consecutive shots of the
London Eye, the purple lit Waterloo Bridge and the similarly lit downward tilt
of the shot in which Aaron is on the phone. The movement from the warmly lit,
comfortable interior of the board room to the harsh and cold lights of the city
emphatically represents the narrative journey of Aaron, moving away from the
traditionally British ideal of Social Realism and in to a more connotation
based sub-genre of Crime Thrillers.
Due to the aforementioned hybridity between genres it was
important to create a bond between the characters and audience; this was
attempted through motivational editing within the first act where personalised
close ups of Aaron are viewed in conjunction with speech reflecting his past
and the narrative events which would lead up to the breaking of equilibrium.
His sense of power is lost within the first 30 seconds of the trailer, moving
from domineering low angled shots within a business like environment to the
asymmetric framing of the Bar shot, in which his transition from Suit and Shirt
to scruffy polo and jeans reflects the change in his narrative situation. The
idea of loss and eventual retention of power is one typical of the genre, being
found within staples such as The Dark
Knight Rises, Hummingbird, Heat and Lucky Number Slevin. This conformity to both genre and trailer
conventions is further enhanced within the casting of Aaron, highlighting the
characters metrosexual and appealing nature, reflecting the lead actors of
James McAvoy, Ryan Gosling and Ryan Reynolds within previously mentioned films.
These actors sometimes adopt the look of vulnerable yet powerful individuals
which is further developed within the casting of both the main villain being older
and the police boss being a similar age. This de-familiarizes the perceived
main villain’s character and allows Barthes Action Code to take effect; playing
with ideals of expectations and representations within class, age, and power,
something common within the Crime Thriller genre’s conventions.
Hummingbird |
Narrative/Structure - 6
Within the narrative structure of the trailer we have
conformed to the conventions which are prominent within the media business,
moving from equilibrium and character development in Act 1 to a break in the
normality of life and plot progression at the end of Act 1/Start of Act 2 and a
high paced montage for the final Act. By adhering to this structure we were not
only able to introduce a variety of characters and individual situations clearly
but also utilise our extensive research and planning in to the film genre,
reflecting Welcome to The Punch’s
motivational interweaving of meeting and action. Not only does this draw upon
Barthes, but also Todorov’s narrative theory with specific relevance to “The
Biter Bit”; Aaron Mayes throwing off his oppressive situation to a suggested
positive outcome. Within the narrative development, as aforementioned, an
emersion in the characters situations is necessary to best utilise Barthes
Semic and Action codes, and as such a voice over was not deemed relevant. We
felt that the non-diegetic sound would distract the audience from the
characters development, motivational lighting and pathetic fallacy which is put
in place to develop upon narrative. While influences such as Memento and Fight
Club do not conform to this three act trailer structure causing the definition
of trailer conventions to blur within this genre, staples like Se7en, Léon, No Country for Old Men
and Reservoir Dogs’ three act
structures were definite influences for our own production.
Editing/Sound - 7
Editing/Sound - 7
The editing of our trailer was specifically tailored to
replicate the increase in tension that comes across through final cut effects
such as sudden fades to black and breathing sound effects. Similarly to the
aforementioned colour connotations, this sound layering develops upon the
aesthetically explanatory images shown to the audience in an attempt to expand
upon ideals of stress, desire, insecurity and danger which are staples of the
genre. Through increasing pace throughout the trailer after a sudden drop
following the conclusion to Act 1, the audience is exposed to the slow
degradation of Aaron’s situation with relation to both the police and alternate
antagonists. A sense of danger and threat was necessary if the trailer was to
conform to conventions of the genre and as such the closing shot was
specifically placed there to highlight an unresolved conflict which was to be
expanded upon within the final film. Through the previously mentioned development
of characters within Act 2, the montage is then intended to have a greater
emotional engagement from an active audience due to the relevance of family,
friends and protection which is once again drawn upon in Barthes narrative
codes. As with Welcome to The Punch, A History of Violence and Kill the
Messenger, this emotional development upon surrounding characters relevance
within the narrative is a trope of the genre which we definitely conform to.
Tuesday, 10 February 2015
Sunday, 8 February 2015
Graphics Debate
Graphics:
We had difficulty in selecting our graphics in the first place due to the fact that we had multiple graphics to choose from. We decided upon the graphics that were similar in style to the ones seen in our major influence, 'Welcome To The Punch' as we felt they best suited the style of our trailer. Where to place the graphics was also a problem, as we had to deter slightly from our storyboard plans originally. This was because some of the shots we used were shots we had taken whilst filming that we hadn't originally planned for and grew particularly fond of and so decided to place them into our trailer. This way we had to change the placement of our graphics slightly. However, this did not effect the editing process that much.
We had difficulty in selecting our graphics in the first place due to the fact that we had multiple graphics to choose from. We decided upon the graphics that were similar in style to the ones seen in our major influence, 'Welcome To The Punch' as we felt they best suited the style of our trailer. Where to place the graphics was also a problem, as we had to deter slightly from our storyboard plans originally. This was because some of the shots we used were shots we had taken whilst filming that we hadn't originally planned for and grew particularly fond of and so decided to place them into our trailer. This way we had to change the placement of our graphics slightly. However, this did not effect the editing process that much.
Friday, 6 February 2015
Audience Feedback and Changes
The editing of the trailer went relatively to plan, however, the original plan of the storyboard was not followed. It was found that especially within the editing of Act 1 the interweaving of the meeting shots and the raid shots worked much better, providing a more stark juxtaposition of equilibrium (In the meeting room) and how that equilibrium was to be broken (The raid). It also served to anchor the narrative with the sound bridges of "This is the bastard that killed my partner" and "He will be in Denmark Hill at 0800 hours" providing a basis for the cutting, and a location and motivation for our protagonists actions.
Moving away from the actual sequence of the shots, which went relatively to plan, our second difficulty came within adhering to the colour and tone aims we had set ourselves. We attempted to go about this through the Final Cut feature 'Colour Match', with examples being shown below as to the various options concerning colouring. Due to our influence within the Chibnall quote concerning the "Dynamic narrative" connoted through the "High Gloss New-London" and Welcome to The Punch's neon gloss, this colouring was a major factor in presenting the stylistics which we had discussed in our research and planning.
A rough cut can be seen below, with no music attached and incomplete sound.
As well as the importance of connotations we used this tool to make some shots look more professional, especially due to the mic shadow present within the interrogation scene prior to the darkening of the shot.
A rough cut can be seen below, with no music attached and incomplete sound.
We received audience feedback on this, both positive and negative, and went about attempting to make these things better. The feedback is as follows:
POSITIVE
- Colouring
- Snappy editing
- clear sense of character
NEGATIVE
- No soundtrack
- Dialogue needs work in terms of sound quality and volume (re recording suggested)
- Narrative somewhat unclear, needs anchoring
- Some colour matching possibly required, maybe ken burns/photoshop?
Finally, we experienced difficulties when syncing our voiceover moments to the shots on screen, especially the moment with the 'news announcement'. This moment was particularly difficult as we wanted it to look and sound professional, especially because it is easy for a news style presentation, as seen in many films, to come across as quite 'amateurish' and so we spent a lot of time recording different voices until we found one that worked with the overall style of our trailer and the one, which sounded most professional. Another difficult moment was in Act 2 whereby we wanted to employ a voiceover of our main protagonist talking about our main antagonist, whilst being overlaid over a shot of the antagonist walking to his car. This was difficult as I had to cut particular moments of speech apart, adjust sound levels and then place each sound bite specifically over the long shot in order to keep with the timing and pace (overall rhythm) of the trailer. Some of the small speech was completely cut out in order to achieve this aim of keeping to the rhythm of the trailer.
Tuesday, 3 February 2015
Magazine Construction 3
The final magazine construction changed the following points -
- "Featuring" was added underneath the title in the same type face and style in order to both adhere to the genre and make the writing on the cover more evident that it is part of the magazines features.
- A date and price were added - originally these were theorised to go at the top in yellow, but I found the contrast in colours displeasing and the placing of them to derive from the most striking area of the cover. As such, they were added to the bottom.
- Puffs were added, drawing upon the Little White Lies tradition of having them framing the face of the main image, both in order to not detract from the central art and to draw attention to not only the main feature. Due to my target audience being those who enjoy cult cinema, reference to films such as "Drive" (Enticing Nicholas Winding-Refn fans) and Nightcrawler (Attracting a more modern audience) would increase audience interest in the magazine. Originally, the puffs were to be the same font and colour as the date and time, winding around the head in a sort of Halo arc, however, this was not continued due to the aesthetically pleasing nature of the final choice.
- A title was added, utilising the dichotomy of the word "Two" in presenting two colours with the varying backdrops of white and black, connoting good and evil. The title has a marble overlay which is shown below, and an inversion of colour was used to transform it from light to dark blue.
The final poster, including all mentioned above. |
The originally attempted puffs |
The original placing of the date and time, not used. |
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